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Post by × KAY on May 24, 2011 17:00:56 GMT -5
[ name ]: Hollowkit, Hollowpaw, Hollowfang, Hollowstar. [ age ]: Twenty-eight moons, born in the winter. [ gender ]: Female, not spayed. [ clan ]: EastClan. [ rank ]: Leader. -- [ description ]: Hollowstar is made up mostly of lithe, sinewy muscle built for speed rather than brute force. From head to tail she possesses a black hue which reaches down to both hind legs. The rest of her fur is white, lacking any shine and in fact appears rather filthy. In actuality this she-cat is rather immaculate and kempt from excessive grooming.
Physical weakness isn't the name of her game. Although she might not have any bulk, her limbs are long and implemented with exceptional swiftness. Speed matched with skills make up for any of her physical faults, but do not mistake her for being weak. She'll show you whose boss.
As far as any special traits go, both of her ears are each lined with three sterling studs. Her claws are irregularly long and sharp from being reinforced with various animal bones she's collected over many moons. Hollowstar's eyes are fairly significant in their rich color of dynamic green, often surfacing fear in others because of their cold essence. One more thing to note is that her tail is considerably long. -- [ personality ]: Hollowstar's "unclean" looking fur resembles the very core of her spirit. Think of her brain as a meticulous machine, seeing everything, missing nothing, and highly calculating. She's truly an intuitive, secretive cat that tends to be quite mischevious in her ways. Cunning as she is, Hollowstar keeps her wicked side tucked away in the depths of her own thoughts.
On the other hand, Hollowstar appears a dignified leader. Quick-witted and strong-willed is how she rolls. She is not likely to become intimidated, instead being the intimidater. There's a small part of her heart that remains soft, unhindered by the rest of her harsh tendencies and that is kits. She's the first to arrive as soon as a litter is born and takes special care in making sure that nothing happens to them, certainly deeming them a top priority. Touch a kit and your tail is hers.
Lastly, it is easy to distinguish where her loyalties lie and that is with her clan. Hollowstar will not tolerate traitors and is quick to put them in their place. Trespassers, prisoners beware. EastClan is not where you want to be while she's running things. Rough times call for a tough leader. -- [ history ]: Being born in the bitter cold of winter isn't exactly a kit's cup of tea. Greencough settles in and other sicknesses flow through the camp. Hollowkit, now Hollowstar, was one of the few lucky kits that seemed untouched by those deadly afflictions. She was born to Sootfoot and never knew her father for sometimes the queens chose to keep that to themselves. Perhaps she was ashamed of her mate. Though it isn't known to Hollowstar, her father disappeared shortly after the dreadful prophecy came about. His rogue name is Snake, derived from his warrior name Snakeeyes.
Hollowstar's kithood wasn't terribly extravagant. Nothing out of the usual occured 'cept that none of her siblings survived the fevers that the cold brought. Sootfoot gave her last kit special attention and always tried to keep Hollowstar under her wing just about all the time. But she wouldn't have none of that and often snuck away when her mother was sleeping to bother other warriors and kits. She liked that some of the cats would secretly teach her a few simple warrior moves, that is, without touching her. To test them out she'd convince other denmates to play fight. With the upperhand, most kits went back squealing to their mothers and Hollowstar often scoffed at their weakness. She'd get told on and Sootfoot most likely kept her in for the rest of the day.
When eight moons passed, Hollowstar entered her apprenticeship with her new name Hollowpaw. Stormspirit became Hollowstar's first mentor. It was openly noted what a fast learner she was and how much she excelled in both vital areas. Her favorite fighting technique was the element of surprise, because surprises are just what they are. Surprises - and they work most often than not. Hollowstar's hunting skills came simply natural probably taking her father's genes.
Let us skip to Hollowstar's eighteenth moon. By then Sootfoot and Stormspirit retired from their warrior status and became elders. Hollowstar's second mentor was Spottedfur, a beautiful tabby she cat with blue eyes and a dotted brown pelt. Through several border fights and tactiful hunting patrols, Hollowstar recieved her warrior name Hollowfang. That night she kept guard of the camp in silence until sunrise. Three moons later Hollowfang recieved her first apprentice by the name of Crowpaw. Sadly, in a scrap with some rogue intruders on his fifth moon of training, Crowpaw died from his wounds. Outraged because she told him to run instead of linger and fight with the rest of them, Hollowstar killed the remaining two rogues in grief and revenge. Crowpaw's last dying words came in gurgles and spits. "I'll miss you," he said. Hollowfang bowed her head in sorrow, though her heart still raced from the battle. The rest of the patrol carried his body back home to camp.
And then the battle with SouthClan occured a moon later. It was filled with bloodshed and many cats from both clans died that evening including Spottedfur her second mentor, Roseheart the deputy, and Barleytooth the medicine cat. Hollowstar also attended the battle. She came out if it with some cuts and a sprang paw but quickly returned back to full health. Whitestar named Hollowfang her deputy before the moon was high above their heads. She wasn't surprised though. In fact, she expected it. Hollowstar was the only cat fit for the position at the time and there was no way she'd let another soft-hearted cat like Roseheart take deputy again.
Another moon passed and Sootfoot and Stormspirit passed away from ripe old age. Soon after that Whitestar fell ill with rabies. She was bitten by a fox already infected with it trying to drive it away from the camp. The medicine cat fed her deathberries to stop it from spreading around. And this is how Hollowstar became leader.
[ relationships ]: mother;; Sootfoot (died from old age) father;; Snake (previously known as Snakeeyes, now a rogue) 1st mentor;; Stormspirit (died from old age) 2nd mentor;; Spottedfur (died from the battle with SouthClan) -- [ other ]: Gonna make Snake's bio later.
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Post by Durango on May 24, 2011 20:30:06 GMT -5
Very, very good. Accepted.
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